[β]
β
bitchan
[?] help
π
host1.bitchan.one
π
@nimiT?hY
β±
1w seen
β
0
π
0
β§
1
π hide
send βΏitcoin
[!] follow
[@] review
posts 1
/ 1
[β₯] sort oldest
β±
filter [-]
languages:
on
other
/literature
Would you be so kind as to critique my first chapter? Be as harsh as you like, just looking for some feedback.
https://rentry.org/hqzqve7b
β§
β±
1w
β©