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Protag reads male, it being a woman doesn’t ring true to me. How many women do you know that think this way? Is this an MtF situation? Also I feel like your hearts not in the dog whistling, this is all very generic sentiment. Especially with Jean Raspail being so talked about lately. Which, I guess there’s a reality then where something like that is true but I don’t know. Just seems β€˜easy’ I liked the mouse at the end but it also seems a little on the nose. Might want to pad out the length some and split that off so it’s a little less obvious⏱ 13h↩ 1
>anon hasn't had a coversation with a woman in months but think he's an authority on what "rings true" as female lol⏱ 13h↩