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𓀐 @9boqQ7fg: While finishing the previous draft, I realized I was really pussyfooting around, and it wasn't doing anyone any favours, because the whole thing is one gigantic dog-whistle either way. I wanted to capture that sweet sweet feeling of radicalization into a nervous breakdown. It has to be perfect, or else I am just an edge lord. How did I do? Bretty good DESU. It's light on setting details but it reads like the bible, kind of, and would be bogged down with excessive "Marble columns," etc. No notes.

Protag reads male, it being a woman doesn’t ring true to me. How many women do you know that think this way? Is this an MtF situation? Also I feel like your hearts not in the dog whistling, this is all very generic sentiment. Especially with Jean Raspail being so talked about lately. Which, I guess there’s a reality then where something like that is true but I don’t know. Just seems ‘easy’ I liked the mouse at the end but it also seems a little on the nose. Might want to pad out the length some and split that off so it’s a little less obvious

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𓀐 @R*iMwUy5: >anon hasn't had a coversation with a woman in months but think he's an authority on what "rings true" as female lol+

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