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"/wg/ meetup" edition /wg/ AUTHORS & FLASH FICTION: https://pastebin.com/ruwQj7xQ RESOURCES & RECOMMENDATIONS: https://pastebin.com/nFxdiQvC Please limit excerpts to one post. Give advice as much as you receive it to the best of your ability. Discuss the written works below for practice; contribute, and you shall receive. If you have not performed a cursory proofread, do not expect to be treated kindly. Edit your work for spelling and grammar before posting. Expect critique, not praise. Shitposters should be ignored and reported. >Beginner guides on writing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pHdzv1NfZRM (Improve your Writing: Show, Not Tell) [6:08] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=whPnobbck9s (George Orwell's 4 Tips For Speaking Clearly) [23:00] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YAKcbvioxFk (How to Show, Not Tell: The Complete Writing Guide) [27:19] >Intermediate guides on writing: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/48654.Story https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/3097766-borges-on-writing https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/23056.Image_Music_Text >Advanced guide on writing: Just do it.

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𓀐 @tf4pU?DZ: what do you think of this?+ 3

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𓀐 @9boqQ7fg: While finishing the previous draft, I realized I was really pussyfooting around, and it wasn't doing anyone any favours, because the whole thing is one gigantic dog-whistle either way. I wanted to capture that sweet sweet feeling of radicalization into a nervous breakdown. It has to be perfect, or else I am just an edge lord. How did I do? Bretty good DESU. It's light on setting details but it reads like the bible, kind of, and would be bogged down with excessive "Marble columns," etc. No notes.+ 2

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𓀐 @Yuk*3U58: Protag reads male, it being a woman doesn’t ring true to me. How many women do you know that think this way? Is this an MtF situation? Also I feel like your hearts not in the dog whistling, this is all very generic sentiment. Especially with Jean Raspail being so talked about lately. Which, I guess there’s a reality then where something like that is true but I don’t know. Just seems ‘easy’ I liked the mouse at the end but it also seems a little on the nose. Might want to pad out the length some and split that off so it’s a little less obvious+ 1

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𓀐 @R*iMwUy5: >anon hasn't had a coversation with a woman in months but think he's an authority on what "rings true" as female lol+

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𓀐 @o?9fpgrG: I'm working on my next story about an entitled anthro brat getting her comeuppance via tentacle plant. Here's a sample of my other work. Slice of life feeder/feedee couple https://rentry.org/c249ntmv Domestic comedy about a guy scheming to prevent his wife from losing weight. https://rentry.org/8wrv8yue+

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𓀐 @=NK=DaNQ: write in the morning, or at the end of the day?+

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𓀐 @BN?4ced-: gamedev >beta tester: "this movement is clunky, that boss is bullshit, how do i play the game i skipped the tutorial" >developer: "yeah makes perfect sense need to tweak those and i must improve the tutorial onboarding even more" writing >reader: "this word is confusing, im confused and bored, dropped on ch3" >writer: "are you fucking retardeeeeeddd i chose that word intentionally i am building intrigue fuck you you are not my target audience die die dieeeeee" can someone explain this phenomenon? why does writing feedback specifically make me irrationally mad? ive never had to take this many grains of salt in other mediums but writing seems so fucked on feedback+

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𓀐 @gbZhDm-w: PSA heads up: a persistent anon who unironically describes himself as "trollmaster" (lmao) has taken to flooding the thread with unreadable word salad. You'll recognize his posts when you see them.+

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𓀐 @ZqRybQ4N: im not trying to preserve the original meaning, i just think loathsome is a hilarious and aesthetic word. like you get bonus points if you can fit it in. sometimes beauty > function+

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𓀐 @4k6HVVJT: When you're writing, and you hit a point where you decide "I need to go back and change a prior scene/conversation/description/whatever", do you do that immediately or write a note to yourself and do it after you the whole draft?+

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𓀐 @B5V*e=t5: Random page. Let's shit on it together+ 2

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𓀐 @GXQSW6m=: Reads like shit. >Viktoyia shook her head. Fucking terrible+ 1

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𓀐 @gH6eTphu: what+

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𓀐 @XrRDdA?~: What's the best way to overcome space travel in your opinion? Do you prefer warp drives/hyperspace or cryo pods and accurate travel times?+

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𓀐 @uqewKdM_: I know what you're thinking. Why inflict so much suffering upon oneself? Why destroy oneself to this extent? What could possibly drive a man to abandon life and seek refuge in the arms of filth and the denial of his own humanity? It's simply God. Yes. Each of these acts, which might seem absurd, were in reality attempts to merge with the eternal. By making the ultimate choice to renounce free will and devote myself entirely to the worship and contemplation of female orifices, I drew closer to the divine. For what else but the hairy vulva of the most beautiful woman, that grotesque and gaping hole, the instrument that creates life and annihilates will and dreams forever unrealized? What else but the foul-smelling anus of a young woman in bloom, that blackened stain that contrasts so sharply with the pale beauty of a lovely goddess, a source of nothing but stench and filth, despite the softness, the beauty, the sweet fragrance of a still-fresh female body? What else could be more incredible to revere than the complete negation of the young woman's aesthetic perfection, so naively cherished by the simple-minded without embracing its entirety, without being utterly attracted, shocked, and disgusted by this violence of ideas and such extreme contrasts? In short, without feeling that nanosecond of eternity in the lowest baseness, crushed under the weight of the hidden and forbidden place, that monster of ugliness that I call god. It was with a contented smile that I often listened to my mistress's one-night stands moan with pleasure. As they emptied their seed into her carrot-haired hole, they imagined they possessed her, had conquered her, understood her. Poor fools. They had only experienced a fleeting moment of heaven, when her hot pussy greedily welcomed their spunk. After that, they were nothing to her, shells that had only tasted the sweet side of the divine being without ever being satiated by its sour side, so essential to the alchemical mixture of eternal life. As for me, I had devoured her entire being. I possessed her to the very depths of her intimacies, her forbidden secrets, down to the smallest beauty mark in the crease of her buttocks. She possessed me body and soul. We were in perfect harmony. I had tasted, licked, worshipped every part of her being down to the most intimate forbidden one. Her periods held no secrets for me; She, whom men worshipped like a god and showered with ever more gifts and offerings, she surrendered herself to me in the most complete and exposed way possible. I had seen God in his most extreme nakedness.+

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𓀐 @7U?thwRJ: I'm currently on chapter five of my book I've big plans for this book series man. My goal is five books working up towards the fantasy world I've dreamed in my head for the while the Iman password is 8063 https://pastebin.com/fxhn4s4T+

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𓀐 @52X8tbsd: Is this anything? Semi-true, probably the easiest thing to write so far but that may not be good.+

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𓀐 @ZdK=K=+5: So if I just write short stories, where should I post them if I just want people to read them and don't care about money? I usually upload to Literotica but for whatever reason when I try to upload lately, it doesn't work.+

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𓀐 @wa4qwWym: Tourist here, forgive me but I didn't know where else to ask. I'm looking to better my writing as somebody who's never dabbled in it before. I'm not striving to be a writer or publish a novel; I'm an artist first and foremost but I wish to make a comic someday, or at least small simple works that can resonate with people. Any tips on how to stimulate your imagination? Barely read any books (sorry) so are there must-reads I need to know about, and what writing exercises would you recommend?+

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𓀐 @DHiCje79: right here man https://rentry.co/dgo2fqd8 Sorry for being a day late with this shit man+

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𓀐 @ichq45p5: Right, they think about their ‘porcelain flesh’ and their ‘barren womb’ I’m not even saying it’s bad. The stoned panic part is believable, the bathroom collage and mouse killing is nice. I’m just saying it’s not convincing as a female voice. Maybe an effeminate man. I think you’re getting defensive because it’s true.+

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𓀐 @ooeHxkWF: So besides more fat smut does anyone have any actual finished work to show?+

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𓀐 @sgAesFhM: 1/3 I don't know why I'm doing the dialogue tagging like this, but I like how it looks on the page. I think this is part of a longer thing, I don't know. Experimenting with just doing way too much exposition; fiction for stupid people+

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𓀐 @PPDV*dgE: Are you one of those people who never read and instead just watch tiktok reels and now thinks he can write the best book ever because none of the books he's come across is like a tiktok reel?+

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