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Wouldn't it be fun to rewrite these removing all first person reference, and transform it into a non-egotistical religious text?

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𓀐 @ELYafxHr: Or, just stick entirely to the collective third person. Why 'you' or 'I'? Maybe 'we' or go full surrealist for purposeful divine effect and use no articles or pronouns at all+

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𓀐 @sGj2qv8q: No, that would remove our personal endeavours to convince the other.+

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𓀐 @L-PFB4Sn: Here. Practicing my speaking skills. Removed all articles (the, a) and a couple other things (get over your egos lmfao) let me know what you think) https://vocaroo.com/1tD1Z7ZowiTf+ 4

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