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+⧖For Harry Potter generally and to soak up /tv/ Malfoid rejects in particular. Something I'm curious about; how does /lit/ feel about the Ron/Hermoine romance subplot? Good? Bad? Salvageable? And what makes a good romance subplot for a story like this? For Harry Potter generally and to soak up /tv/ Malfoid rejects in particular. Something I'm curious about; how does /lit/ feel about the Ron/Hermoine romance subplot? Good? Bad? Salvageable? And what makes a good romance subplot for a story like this?
𓀐 @hgSqM6us: Two OC's that were introduced to the reader when Harry spotted them going at it outside the Syltherin dorms. Quite jarring considering how graphic it was, compared to Harry and Malfoid. Harry informs Malfoid, Malfoid starts blackmailing one of them, the other one says "I'm oppressed surely you'd understand" and Malfoid goes "yeh totes babe" and does a weird flirting thing. They become friends, decide the best way to cover their own arses would be for Harry to dance with the short lesbian as to quash rumours about the respective couples and Harry and Draconia decide to practice dancing. Ball happens, lesbian is lecturing Harry the entire time (author hamfistedly justifying the character, Harry needs to be told) until Harry and Draconia slip off and have their moment. With singing armour. After the Ball, Draconia is either hanging about with the lesbians or hanging about Harry or by herself. For example, for the 2nd and 3rd trials, she's sitting with them in the stands. It's two OC's that are hamfisted in, it's transparent, it's shit writing and I genuinely hate faggots and faggot fetishisers.

>Quite jarring considering how graphic it was I'm pretty sure two women kissing in public would be jarring for you. >"I'm oppressed surely you'd understand" Not oppressed, Twigs is just a mirror of a secret relationship due to the political nature of their families in relation to the ministry and the required need for wizards to keep making families. >"yeh totes babe" Draconia realizes that they get along well, and feels bad about blackmailing her, in which they enter a mutual exchange of information. >and does a weird flirting thing Draconia makes fun of Twigs for being a lesbian. >They become friends, decide the best way to cover their own arses would be for Harry to dance with the short lesbian as to quash rumours about the respective couples and Harry and Draconia decide to practice dancing. Based. >Ball happens, lesbian is lecturing Harry the entire time It is implied that Twigs is skilled at Divination and may also be a mind reader, or some other form of witch that can feel empathic waves, and in thus reads Harry's mind and warns him to not let his judgement get the better of him. I read the passage, if the writer didn't lay it out flat, people would completely skip by and not understand, like you, for instance. >Harry and Draconia slip off and have their moment. With singing armour. Leading to a sweeter and more romantic first, proper dance. I'm sorry you're too dumb to understand it. >After the Ball, Draconia is either hanging about with the lesbians or hanging about Harry or by herself. For example, for the 2nd and 3rd trials, she's sitting with them in the stands. And? She's friends with Twigs, Autumn is likely to be there. >It's two OC's that are hamfisted in, it's transparent, it's shit writing and I genuinely hate faggots and faggot fetishisers. Just say you're a closeted homosexual Anon, this is a safe place.

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